Pitch Reflection

Pitch Reflections

The  Feedback

Here is footage of my class who expressed their feedbacks towards my music video pitch ...

Areas of the presentation you would like to give any more detail on: 

I think the areas i could of expanded on during my music video pitch such as my artist identity and my production schedule. First area i could of expanded on is my 'Artist identity' I didn't give a clear unique idea of how i personally want my artist to look like as well as how they are going to come across through within my music video.To expand on what i should of said when doing my music video pitch, that my artist is not going to be a replicate of Rhianna but will have 'similliar' aspects of the artist and how i will make her different is that she will have more con troll on what she will want to look like considering the genre of the music video is soul/jazz as these genre do not have a typically view on how artist are meant to be characteristically, so therefore my artist will have her own way of dressing wick is a way to put her stamp on the genre she represents. I would also have to expand on my shot types or angles that I wish to show in my music videos ,i would like my shots to have a lot of movement as well as being able to show my narrative, but i believe as my song is up beat my camera movement should compliment my beat, along with that i would of also of liked to cover that i would of used a lot of close ups to see the expressions of my characters, because my song is an emotional song it is important that there is many use of close ups as my song is emotional so this is a way that my audience can see the emotion shown of the character.

What my audience identified as strengths:

Once i finished my pitch, i then got feedback and questions about my pitch that i had to justify. The strengths i got from my feedback is that i presented my work with confidence, good tone and clear idea. I think overall the audience had an understanding on how i would like my music video to be like such as visuals, conventions etc.. i think this is because i went into depth and making sure that my audience was engaged as well as understanding what my most important ideas are some of the members of the audience stated "its was very in depth, that's why there isn't many questions to ask". Which you see in my reflection not many question were asked about my pitch.

What my audience identified for my improvements:

My audience had a few points that i had to improve on such as making sure i do not need permission to film up central London, i got this feedback from serife to improve this i will have to do some research and possible places i will like to record, so this does not effect the shots add locations i plan to have. another improvement i will have to look at is have a more unique idea for my artist as Mr Clark pointed out "if my artist is going to be exactly like Rhianna" as i did many comparisons to the artist, to improve this i will have to make sure my artist does not have completely the same characteristic as Rhianna, one of the ideas i have come up with is that my artists will not be dressed in the sense for male gaze which is what Rhianna presents within her videos. I was also asked by another member of the audience about my age range which is 16-30years ask they asked "do you not think that 16-30, is to wide for my target audience" after i have been asked this, i then remembered i did not justify why i chose this as my age range and next time i should put more thought into my target audience.

What changes i will make:

After receiving the feedback from my class, i  then reviewed my video and thought about the possible changes i would make for my production. First change  is that i plan before hand and do some research on the places i would like to record, such as central London not knowing if i need permission to record in certain places can have and effect on my production schedule as i may have to come up with another location that is convenient to my music video, as well as not being able to look how i exactly planed for my music video to look, so the change will be that i should do more research in to everything I plan for my video.I would also like to change the narrative idea of my music video as my genre of the video is soul/jazz and has a unique sound to the song i believe the video should add to this as decided to use amplifying from Goodwin theory, a way i thought my music video can add to the unique style of the song is that  the narrative has an unique twist, this is one of the changes I would like to make as i thought about my ideas more, but i have not come up with what the "unique twist" will possibly be.